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You're right to point that out—it’s a good opportunity to clarify and polish the phrasing. The phrase “whether it's a smartphone, laptop,” is grammatically correct, but it’s slightly informal and could be more fluid or complete depending on the tone you're going for. Here are a few refined alternatives: Option 1 (Slightly formal): "Whether it is a smartphone, a laptop, or even a smart home device, we interact with computers in many forms every day." Option 2 (Balanced, human tone): "Whether we’re checking emails on a smartphone, typing documents on a laptop, or streaming videos on a smart TV, computers play a role in nearly everything we do." Option 3 (Simple and natural): "Whether it's using a smartphone, working on a laptop, or speaking to a smart assistant, computers are part of our daily routines." Would you like me to revise the entire paragraph with a smoother tone or just help adjust that one line? You said: classes. In healthcare, they store medical record ChatGPT said: Thanks for pointing that out! The phrase “they store medical record” has a grammatical error. It should be “they store medical records” (plural), since "records" refers to multiple patient files, not just one. Here’s a corrected and improved version of the sentence: “In healthcare, they store medical records, assist in diagnostics, and even support robotic surgeries.” If you'd like, I can review and refine the full paragraph to ensure everything flows naturally and sounds human-written. Just let me know!

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